“Mawdryn Undead” is a four-part serial written with passion and enthusiasm by Peter Grimwade, directed with either disinterest or contempt for the material by Peter Moffatt, and featuring music by Paddy Kingsland that sounds like a joke B-side from one of Erasure’s earliest singles.
As I’ve mentioned before, many Doctor Who adventures from the serial days will start strong before petering out. “Mawdryn Undead” is possibly unique in that it becomes a good, interesting story with a great idea at its core, but it begins with what is very nearly the worst first episode in the whole of the program. The first episode of “The Twin Dilemma” is even worse, but that serial never gets any better as it goes along, so the mind-crushing awfulness of the first part of “Mawdryn” is an amazing standout.
And, in fairness, I should concede that Kingsland’s music also gets a little better as the story continues, but the dumb, jaunty “joyride” music that accompanies the young men pretending to be teenagers in their straw boater hats as they steal the car will be stuck in my head on my dying day. I’ll talk more about Turlough, one of the biggest missed opportunities in the whole series, another time. Suffice it to say for now that in 1982-83, Doctor Who was in such a dumb headspace that they honestly thought that making the school bully into a companion was a good idea.
Even the effects defy suspending disbelief. Most of the time, when Doctor Who gives us a show-stopping terrible special effect, it has the decency to wait until the end of the serial, and it almost always looks like the work of very talented people who did their very best with the time and money available and just couldn’t quite bring it off. Four minutes into “Mawdryn” and Turlough is supposed to be having an out-of-body experience on the astral plane, and all that the visual effects team bothered to do was switch on the background animation from a game show hosted by Wink Martindale.
But here’s what really gets my goat. Here’s your big guest star this week: some guy.
Come off it. There’s never been a worse directorial decision than Peter Moffatt’s stultifying choice in reintroducing Nicholas Courtney as Brigadier Lethbridge-Stewart*. Turlough and “Hippo” do not name the owner of the car they steal. There could have been a line like “This is that retired brigadier’s car,” for starters. No, an actor with his back to the camera says “How are things on your end, Brigadier?” and we’re supposed to recognize the man who responds to that line as the same man who we know by his military uniform and mustache, and who had not appeared in the program in eight years.
This is the lazy work of a show that is not trying. Everybody involved has figured they can pull it off because they wager that the only people watching will have read about it in magazines and newspapers ahead of time. They’re letting the PR department announce the character so they don’t have to bother. I made a different bet: that Marie and our son wouldn’t have a clue who this guy was, and I was right. Marie noted that he was called “brigadier,” but didn’t realize it was Lethbridge-Stewart, because after twenty-five minutes, the script still hasn’t identified him as anybody we’ve ever met before.
At least it gets better. The next episode is almost terrific.
*Although another candidate for this honor would be Peter Moffatt again, two years after this story, reintroducing the Sontarans by way of an establishing shot from about a hundred yards away.
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Oh, yes, Peter Moffat. I can’t recall if I’ve mentioned this before, but my impression of Moffat was that he was one of those directors whose goal was to get the job done on time, under-budget, and in as semi-competent a manner as possible, no doubt believing that whatever program he happened to be working on would air once or twice on the BBC, and then never be seen again.
Actually, thinking it about it for a sec, it was probably Pennant Roberts who I said that about, since he worked along the same lines as Moffat, i.e. just get it done so there’s something to put on the air.
Admittedly the realities of television production in Britain in the 1970s and 80s probably lent itself to this mindset. Directors such as Douglas Camfield, Peter Grimwade and Graham Harper were probably very much the exception to the rule. No one back then could have imagined that a quarter century later these stories would end up being endlessly re-watched on home video, DVDs, streaming services, etc.
The direction and staging of “State of Decay” is just so much better than this. Moffat honestly got worse and worse the more he worked on the show.
…and featuring music by Paddy Kingsland that sounds like a joke B-side from one of Erasure’s earliest singles.
Now that you mention it, a song like “Sweet, Sweet Baby” would have been right at home in this episode. Yeesh!
You could sync up “March On Down the Line” to that joyride scene almost perfectly.